Pre-Writing for Children of the River

1. I would be very caught off guard seeing how I think that no one would ever attack South Portland. I feel safe here and I am used to never having to worry about that type of stuff. I would immediately go to my parents and ask questions because I wouldn't know what was going on since I don't follow government issues. I would be in such a panic and want to hid and find the best way to be safe before they come in. I wouldn't want to leave because I love my home and it would be hard to decide what to bring and what to leave.

2. I would feel so guilty that I did not have my parents and that I left them behind. I think I would choose to stay and find my family that way I know I tried to do something. If I had to choose to leave someone behind I think would leave some of my friends and choose my family that way I can be sure I am safe and have them guiding me. If I didn't know the language or knew anyone I would feel out of place and confused.

3. My life would be changed forever, I would have to start a new life and fend for myself. I would try to blend in with everyone else and hopefully I can make a new start.  

Blog Questions, Valid Sources, and Commas

When you site a online source you have to do more then just give the URL.  You have to give the authors name and title of article, say who provided it and gave the date it was released and the date it happened.

Citations-Wikipedia. "O. J. Simpson murder case - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia." Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia. N.p., n.d. Web. 13 Dec. 2010. <http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/O._J._Simpson_murder_cas

The website that you gave us the link to was not reliable.  There were fake pictures and wrong information about the animal on the site. I had been showed this site in 8th grade and they found a way to show us that it was fake because it wasn't authorized or accepted by the government.

1. My mom went shopping and bought me shirts, pants, sunglasses, and a pair of jeans.
2. Would you like some milk with your meal, Ali.?
3. Yesterday, I believe was a red day.
4. Akadia, the professional soccer player, loves Justin Bieber.
5. Sarah and Lia are in Mrs. Ferrate's class, but not in Mr. Kahill's.
6. I live in Florida, home of the oranges.
7. I ran outside in the dark, rainy night.
8. Rachel was born in June 6th, 1994.

Define in own words

Valid- An actual thing, supporting

Reliable- constantly good

Accurate-correct in all details, right information

Research Step 1

For research so far I have looked up the sports and entertainment justice. I have looked up certain crimes that have been on the news lately and in the past. The ones I have looked at so far have affected many other people which is why I feel they are important and more relevant. I feel the project is going to be good because it is on everything that I have seen and already learned.